Tuesday, December 1, 2009

One: Sunset Sing-Along

[I deleted this poest because it is included in my chapbook, "Unto the East." However, the very hilarious original ending is worth keeping up:

love or money in the end, plus their pride on a long
journey home. I win only one of those though
you could guess which it is - score one for me.

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** I do not like the end of this poem but it's kinda funny so good enough for me to post...
goodnight, and K-Poet, I hope you're happy! :) -CG**

5 comments:

  1. Clap clap clap. Totally didn't see the cowboy twist coming. Nicely done.

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  2. I love this! I've never been a poet myself, and I feel like I've never learned "how" to read poetry, but yours is so clear.
    And I like the cowboy part. :)

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  3. Way to rock CG. I vote for more poetry as well - Cdub

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  4. LOVE it! You are so talented at capturing these almost unspeakable (sometimes it feels like unthinkable) emotions in words. Thank you so much for this poem -- I have a feeling I'm going to be visiting this site to reread it often, just as I have with your Dragon poem!

    Yay for waiting.
    xoxo,
    Piper

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  5. Oh CG you say so much.

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Thanks for commenting! Your comment will be posted ! -CG