A Lonely Only Nobody Else
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you can be hiding in the bathroom, three feet and one door blocking
and you can be alone
you can be laying by your lover,
and you can be alone
you can be singing in a choir, sunday and voices raising
and you can be alone
everyone knows you can surround yourself with people
and you are still alone
everyone knows she can keen-or-cry for you
and you are still alone
everyone knows he can whisper-sigh to you
and you are still alone
people think that when you’re dying
that your are not alone
people say it when you’re crying
that you are not alone
people don’t believe that they are lying
that you are not alone
but you are
but you are
but you are
and so and so and so
and so what of it
of it and all before it
if you are reading this poem you should know
that you are not alone
and you are still alone
and you can be alone
only if you alone
can leave me
alone.
Good stuff. I'll never leave you alone, love, your stalker
ReplyDeleteThank Goodness!! You neither.
ReplyDeleteLove, your stalker twin.
I love this. I will probably make my boyfriend read it... which means a lot ;)
ReplyDeleteLove the repetition and structure.
ReplyDeleteLovely - and love you alone or any other way.
ReplyDeleteMama Kehl
Tabitha! Where is your blog? I want to link to it on the Patient Press page where I dedicated UNTO THE EAST.
ReplyDeleteAND, reading your comments on this and UnBlog- the best thing to do when you want to start writing and don't know where to begin or if you're any good anymore, is just start doing it. Who cares how it turns out! :)
LOVE this - and you, of course. :o)
ReplyDeleteHahaha you are funny! I dont have a blog, I just read others :) (im a stalker)
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for the advice! I have already started a wee bit even!
So true.
ReplyDeleteYou have a beautiful and touching blog. If you ever want to raise awareness of Cystic Fibrosis and are in Australia we would love to help out with sponsoring you and maybe printing some free t shirts our website is http://www.theprintbar.com if you ever need free printing done. Great and inspiring blog.
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